The job of a web site is to give the visitor (prospective customer) all the information they need to make that buying decision. The simple phrase is educate, inform, motivate.
There is a well know acronym of AIDA
Attention
Interest
Desire
Action
These are the four stages everyone goes through before they buy. If your web copy is not doing this, and you are missing calls to action, then you are losing money. Lack of a call to action is one of the most common errors on a page. 'Click here for FREE information' is a simple instruction that will get people taking the action you want.
So how about educate and motivate? How do you get the ninterest and desire? A simple re-write of your site can have a dramatic effect on its success, and it can pay for itself in no time at all. So what is the difference between selling and telling?
Product descriptions:-
Available in black
In stock
Next day delivery
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Available in jet black, allowing you to wear this beautiful necklace with almost every outfit you own. This can be delivered to your door overnight if the order is placed before 3pm, and the item is : in stock
It is plain to see which of the above tells, and which sells!
The plain fact is that as a web marketer it is your job to sell yourself, your services, or your products, and you need to understand the difference, if you don't, then your orders/enquiries are going to someone else.

